Querying Resource
How to Write a Query Letter
A practical guide to crafting a query letter that captures the spirit and plot of your book and leaves a literary agent wanting more.
Think of it like a movie trailer
Writing a query letter focuses on catching the spirit and plot of your book in a gripping summary akin to pitching an advertisement. Think about it like a movie trailer. You are pitching the most gripping parts of your story with a pinch of emotions to sell the intensity and a dash of mystery to leave the literary agents intrigued and questioning for more.
Remember to always address the agent at the top of the letter, as well as noting your word count and genre towards the end.
Common query letter mistakes
Don’t mention how many books you’ve written
You can mention how many you have published as examples of writing credits in a passing sentence, but only works that have actually been published.
Don’t make grandiose promises
Certainly do not make high-expectation-setting claims like “My book will move one million units” or “this book will become a New York Times bestseller.” Making strong promises like this right out of the gate can come off as very intense.
Never query before your book is finished
At least the second draft. You want to put your best foot forward, and going to agents before you even have a finished manuscript to present them is not how you do that.
Check what genres the agent represents
Be sure to check what genres the literary agent you’re submitting to represents. Picking action when you’re pitching a horror story is a quick way to get a rejection.
Keep your word count within genre constraints
Make sure your word count is within the genre constraints. See our Word Count Guide for the recommended ranges.
The takeaway
Following these tips and more will help you snag that literary agent and get your book onto shelves!